No Escape

by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden   Jun 19, 2008


Due to popular demand James and I have done another one together. :D

James: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=282110

James did the first stanza, I did the second. He did the third and I did the last line of the third. I did the fourth stanza, he did the first two lines of the last while I did the last two lines. :)

Stuck with a hole in my soul
No where I can turn
My spirit has been broken
And my heart will soon burn

I must claw my way out
My escape of this pit is dire
But I fall back each time
To find my self in Hell's fire

I am face to face with myself
The evil side burning in hell
I have lost my passion and grace
The realness of the demons I cannot tell

Why must I be trapped
in this place called Hell
I am in need of help
I know I'm not well

I'm stuck with a hole in my soul
There is no corner I can turn
There is no way out of this place
To sanity I'll never return

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  • 17 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    Ill I have to say is wow. You guys gave me a great idea doing that. =]

    so much emotions and strong feelings.
    Nice I luv how it can be so deep within each short sentence. I luv it

  • 17 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "There is No corner I can turn"
    -Oops, you didn't mean to capitolize no..

    other than that, another great piece put together why two amazing poets. it's great to see that you get along w/ james. :] you two are making some great pieces up. this poem was filled w/ emotions and a clear point.. that there was no way to turn. well done both of you, 5/5.

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