Dreams or Reality?

I understand what you are going through. i give it a 5/5

Aww !! Nice poem, you've both done a great job with it. It was surely an enjoyable read.

I loved the imagery that was created here with your words because I could imagine it all clearly in my head. You both took a even that happens to everyone and made it a beautiful epxerianced. It has happened to me many times that I wake up thinking did that really happen or was I dreaming? You both did an amazing job and your styles complimented each other.

My thing that rubbed me the wrong way was descibing his lips as soft in two places. Try using a different word like gentle or something like that.

Other than that beautifully done you two!

*5/5*

Very good. At first I only read your parts but then I read all of it....its good both ways...good job. I like the vision of this too

-returningyourmello193

This was really cute! I loved the contrast of emotions, too. Like, how you were certain that you loved him, but weren't sure if you even shared a tender moment with him. Very good.