Collapse

Without support of that love we simply collapse. Powerful and precise.
Take care.

Powerful little piece that says an awful lot in so little space

Wonderful piece achieved in so little space. Excellent

Oh Jee, :( I really miss you and this Collapse poem is just as heart aching. Few words but enough to express in a very beautiful way what you're feeling.

It's not hard to actually feel and sense and see the image you've created for us. I think there is nothing harder than losing the source of strength, especially when it is someone we hold dear. I love this poem and can relate.

Just that first line is so powerful and emotional. I can picture finally allowing yourself to cry and then being in the bitter cold, not having shelter from that person. Sorry for whatever you're going through <3