Dig My Grave

Great job. You are one of those poets that use rhymes with a natural flair. For that reason, your level is much higher but I would still like to see a free-style poem from you like the old master Frost or Whitman.

Good poem, the first stanza doesnt have the best flow, the last two lines of it mainly, but still a good poem

Sounds like a dark fairytale. Good rhythm.

WOW! This is such an amazing poem! The rythym, the feel - I'm spellbounded and speechless to say the least.
It's short and simple but still effective enough to convey the underlying feelings and portray what needs to be said.
100/5 from me. It's a true and rare masterpiece!

Oh...That was so awesome and well-written...I liked the flow of it...good job,plz keep it up5/5..