Comments : Child Beggar Noshi

  • 15 years ago

    by Goodbye

    This poem is very touching. I have been passing by this kind of angels like Noshi... It is really heart-breaking to witness who life treats people this way..

    Under bad circumstances...Eyes full og light end up begging in the street... And this is sucking the shine out of their eyes...

    This reminds me how this only temporary... Circumstances are changeable..maybe today she is begging in the street...tomorrow it could be you or me...

    In the society...where there is no social security... this can happen....

    But what can be done to prevent angels like Noshi to become a begger...? If one of us would have been wise enough to solve problem there would not be begging...

    Great poem. It reveals the heart of the writer...

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    This poem i must say saddens me we see the state of these kids daily,but sadly there is little to be done.a well written poem,I enjoyed reading it,it flowed and rymed pretty well.Again i say a sad poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by dimitRAHH

    Oww! i feel so sorry for her!
    & this was true... :(
    its so touching!
    i wish i could give her a hug...

    well written!

  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very touching write... with a meaning attach to it...

    "Children with bags and neat clothes on
    When are heading towards their schools
    Angels like Noshi come onto the roads
    And extend out their hands, in search for some food. "

    ^^ so very true... poverty has darkened the future of so many children... except for begging they are not left with any other option... so many little Noshi are out there... extending their hand for help...

    Im glad you wrote a poem on this subject...

    keep writing..

  • 15 years ago

    by Vampiress

    This made me was so sad. It hurts to know that there are children in the world going through that. This was very touching

  • 15 years ago

    by Eliza

    Its very sad, and yet it tells a stroy.
    its beautiful at the same time.
    and it tells how sometimes the greatest most deserving people on the planet are the ones with the worst life and fate and yet they carry on.

    this is true inspiration. great job.

    5 =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Yes, i must say this poem is very touching. so inspiration, i was glued to every word. lovely work you have done yet again!!

    Grieved to look at condition of the child
    Dirty clothes were torn from number of places
    Though her eyes lit like twinkling stars
    But were eagerly searching for helping faces

    i loved that stanza, it was my favorite, yer a wonderful writer, keep it upp.

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem penetrated my heart and soul. It touched me very deeply The imagery is haunting
    sad but well written

  • 15 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Holy shit, WOAH! That was just... amazingly sad. I bow down in the dust of your brilliance and writing skills.

    Thank you for the comment on my poem "The Road to Heaven". I appriciate it.

    I really like this poem. I think I'm adding you to my favorite authors when I read some more.

    The Angel of Secrets

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    This is a very good poem
    as it represents reality
    rather than fantasy and portrays
    the harsh mundane live that
    some children have to live through.
    Great job!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    This poem you wrote was very touching and sad. but the way you described her like an angel was so beautiful. The words you choose in description, your flow, it was so perfect. This poem has really touched my heart and made me think of a lot of things. If this girl is real it makes me want to pray for her. This is a great peice of work 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Nil

    Wow just wow. This poem brought tears to my eyes. I love your choice of words and the flow of this poem. But it's the meaning that really gets me. Simply wonderful 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Meaghan

    Wow this is such a touching story but then again shows the harsh truth of some childrens life today. This poem shows a lot of feeling and you did a great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Wow.. this poem really touched me. I knew things like this were going on in the world of children begging. It's such an awful thing to see, the poem just really shows and captured what you saw, what you felt hearing her story. A child should never have to beg for food or money. but in the world we live in today things like this happening, but we as people don't do much to change it.

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    Oh my gosh I don't know what to say.
    I'll have to write you later as this has got me choked up at the moment
    You did a wonderful job of putting this to pen

  • 15 years ago

    by XDeesxToxicxCookiesX

    Its rele sad to know..tht a girl ..a oung girl like noshi..was livin this kind of life.. cuz when she'll grow up... she wont have all the good memories other kids will have..=[
    i rele feel sorry for her..>.<

    good was touching n so sad...=[

  • 15 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Junaid I found this to be a very touching heart felt story. Your expressions of the girl and her plight were so vivid that as I read it I could not help but feel I was there also.
    we are becoming such a self centered society seeking our own gratification that we neglect those truly in need ,
    A child should never suffer , they are the most precious treasures we have , they are our future and their innosence needs to be protected ay all costs
    Thank you for sharing this heartfelt story my friend 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Wow. This poem was beautiful. It was completely heartfelt, which made it that much better. It's such a sad thing, though, that children must be beggars, because like you said in the piece, they are not meant to be begging; they should be getting an education. You've written a fantastic piece.



  • 15 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    My friend This is the most beautifully heartfelt poem of societys plight I have ever read .
    I have myself lived on the streets and know the cruelty of the world first hand but to exist there as an innocent child , I still have trouble grasping the magnification it truly implies.
    thank you for sharing , I sent this one to poem of the week

  • 15 years ago

    by kayla

    I really like it:) it captured me from the start

    its very sad that there are so many people, children too, who are suffering.

    well done :)