Haiku #20

by PygmyPuff   Jun 26, 2008


Is it jelousy?
He's succeeding in my goals.

Let him have my life.

(This one I altered the structure a bit to add some depth, but if it offends anyone you can imagine the last line pushed up)

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  • 15 years ago

    by Rob Matt

    Theres emotion which makes it good

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