Up & Down

by bleedingximperfection   Jul 1, 2008


Alone, and Scared
Deep down, I realize they never really cared

Stained face caused by my tears
Tears, due to all my fears

Emotions up, emotions down
I can't let myself drown

Drown in all your lies
All the lies bring nothing but cries

Laughing all day, crying all night
Something is wrong, this isn't right

It's all fake, I hate to say
the day I die, I wish would be today

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  • 16 years ago

    by im not the cause

    Wow goosebumps

  • 17 years ago

    by Nobody

    Wow i feel the exact same wya like all i ever do is fake everything to conceal my true thoughts and feelings i really love it! 5/5 xzxx <33

  • 17 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    It so short yet it holds so much power in it and sadness. i loved it

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I prefer if you join each 4 lines in a paragraph and shorten the second line somehow to enable a perfect line construction

    get me?

  • 17 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow strong feelings here good job mind your struicture a bit and the rhyming is acceptable in all a very good one fix it a buit though when you do PM me

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