Unnoticed Deadend

by Countess of Monte Cristo   Jul 2, 2008


Relief...
To me it is a relief...
To you it may be a sad end... to others it may be the victory of their enviness...
But after all, everybody has their own belief

Strange situation
You want revenge... Then comes regret
Life has this mysterious creation...
At any unprepared moment, the stage is set...

Giving each other pain...
Prolonging the journey when you know it was the end...
No sadness... no happiness... nothing to gain...
No rules to bend

Life seemed impossible t o you... When all of us had hope
Now... hope has passed us by...
Like a desert... drinking the rain... But still dry.

Every attempt to breakthrough
Success fades away
Nothing old, nothing new
Remembrance of yesterday's mistakes... forgetting that our setting is today

Life gives us a choice...
Opportunities in disguise...
Your conscience raises its voice...
In some way, it cries

You can either listen to the voice within...
Or you can keep walking to your doom
There are rules...Expectations... To you they are a sin
Your actions are right... That's what you presume...

You call it bravery.
I call it a mere attitude of the weak
You are trapped inside yourself... the worst slavery
I'm here if you felt any remorse...I'm here for you to speak

One last moment...Before life shows its darkest side
It's calling for you to stop, and get back to sanity
The world feeds love, harmony and peace... not pride
Just don't get fooled by your vanity

That is life... a strange situation
You want revenge...Then comes regret
It has its special mysterious creation...
At any unprepared moment... The stage is set.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a great piece. very emotional. there was alot of different emotions mixed all in it, and that's a great thing, very creative.

    Life seemed impossible t o you... When all of us had hope
    Now... hope has passed us by...
    Like a desert... drinking the rain... But still dry.

    i liked those lines the most. great job at comparing the things together. this was a n excellent piece indeed. keep writing! job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Hi! In fact, it's so sweet poem, i like it very much :)
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    Now that was a very very good write .... I loved the way you started, and ended it amazing poem

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