The Gentle Whisper Of My Death

by Tom Swart   Jul 5, 2008


May the signal of my death come as a gentle whisper to your ear
And the moment of my passing enjoy a pause where you
Might gather breath from within where my memory sleeps.

As my name glides lightly over your tongue and lips,
may it join with loves chorus gently awakening the
Sensations that have slept, waiting peacefully for the end.

These vibrations of the last expression of my life
shall echo and fade as each ripple finds refuge
For eternity deep within your heart.

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  • 12 years ago

    by retha

    How shall i love thee, good i think indeed upon your last to receive your first but only love. well done thou hast touched the heart upon which no regret shall rest.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    May the signal of my death come as a gentle whisper to your ear
    ~this is my favorite line but I absolutely loved the entire thing, flow was great and outstanding wording I really loved it :) :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by kimara4955

    I really enjoyed this poem the flow was so natural, yet held so much, the emotions, i could picture it, you have an amazing talent. my only wish is i could be half as good as you. you really capture the moment. beautiful write. 5/5 xx

  • 14 years ago

    by music4pumpkins

    This a beautiful piece. the emotion is intense yet subtle. very unique, i like how you apply death to a person in this.

  • 14 years ago

    by music4pumpkins

    This a beautiful piece. the emotion is intense yet subtle. very unique, i like how you apply death to a person in this.

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