The old willow(Haiku)

by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash   Jul 10, 2008


The old willow(Haiku)

Head hung in sadness
as yellowing green tears fall
playful stream chuckles

Grant
12h04
10.07.2008

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aww...a much beautiful Haiku!
    I cannot believe I overlooked this one!
    You did a superb job on this, Grant:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by smiley

    Nice poem

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    This was simply beautiful. It seems everyone is writing one of these. But so far none are as nice as this one.

  • 15 years ago

    by gracey grey

    Now I really like the contradictions to this haiku....it does happen to humans too you know. Finding amusement in others sadness, or strength from others weaknesses. Very nicely written.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Grant This one simple , short poem relaxed me for a much longer time than the length of it's read ,I enjoyed it > 5/5---JIM

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