5 questions

by slighte   Jul 14, 2008


Do you realise what you've done to me?
Every day I have to fake a smile
And pretend that everything is okay.
I'm sick of having to constantly bite my lip
to keep the tears in.

Why do you always have to lie?
I hate it when you tell me things
That aren't true.
You think it makes me happy
but I'm not stupid.
I'll find out soon enough.

Why do you have to put me through this?
I'm so tired of trying to be
who you want me to be
When all I want to be
is myself.

Why don't you care?
You never said that you wanted me to be happy
You were always saying to suck it up
and get over it.
Because no one likes people who are sad.

Don't you realise how unhappy I am?
You must be able to see.
I guess you don't know me
as well as you think you do.

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  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    I can relate to this poem. nice work 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by LoveTear

    Very sweet , especially i like ur fraze
    "I'm so tired of trying to be
    who you want me to be
    When all I want to be
    is myself."
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Until Again

    Nicely done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Wow 5 really though question , i doubt he can answer those ,

    but the frist paragraph jsut got to me good ,

    and touch me good ,

    i think it is a great poem ,
    but in structure wise i would say it need some wor with rhyming , and line lenght

    :)

    but over all due to teh intese of the poem i beleve no one will notice :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    This poem is full of emotions. But the structure is not that well. I think you should do that in a better way.

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