Pretend Of Somethings New

by gracey grey   Jul 15, 2008


Lets pretend we are one
Holding hands as lovers do
Sharing dreams like before
Cast aside our doubts and fears

Make believe alls alright
Plunge to-wards the bubbly lake
Sip the sun, laze around
Grass cushion our head to sleep

Strip ourselves of all blame
Whisper words of something new
Dance away till we cry
Shake pain off with a laugh

Come my love, kiss me now
Taste my lips of ancient hue
Seal and stamp with promises true
For with you I belong

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aryaan

    Ummm........ it's good. i liked this pretention!

    'Come my love, kiss me now
    Taste my lips of ancient hue
    Seal and stamp with promises true
    For with you I belong'
    Great lines!

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Undo all the hurt, magic away all the pain, erase the oceans of tears, sew up the millions of broken hearts; yes, it is true - lovers can fall in love again!

    Well done

    Michael

  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Very nice and I slowly came into tune with each of your words.
    Make believe alls alright
    Plunge to-wards the bubbly lake
    Sip the sun, laze around
    Grass cushion our head to sleep

    sounds like a very lovely place to be where the hearts full of love rest within what seems to be a blanket of peace you have provided for these lovers thoughts. peace - enjoyed it

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