Just a Simple Poem

by MeltInHisArms   Jul 22, 2008


This aint no great poem
with a happy ending,
no metaphors or mysteries
or struggling and pretending.

This is just a simple poem
one about you and me,
and the feelings I have inside
the ones I want everyone to see.

As you may or may not know
I don't have the best past,
words left unspoken and heartbreaks
with relationships that could never last.

There was a point where I gave up
on the whole love game,
I gave it all up
until along you came.

It's true when I say
you make me smile,
I'm gonna let you see the real me
but it might take a wile.

I got butterflies when you held my hand
and when you hugged me to,
all this may sound cheesy
but I'm happy I found you.

Well that's my simple poem
with not a happy end,
and the reason for that is
I never want what we have to end.

**didn't quite know where to put this poem**

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Wow i thought this poem was different to most and I it was really interesting =]
    Great job, it's a nice piece

  • 15 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Wow great work!
    I kinda.. in a way, felt the same.
    I said i quit on guys.
    I was done...until HE came along.
    and took all my doubt away.

    You did really good. and i really love the opening line of this poem! great work! :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    It's true when I say
    you make me smile,
    I'm gonna let you see the real me
    but it might take a wile.

    sounds like my theme right there
    really good wording couple of spelling errors but it didn't bother me
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Dustin S

    Wow michelle! u got some good stuff!