This Love Is Going To Last

Cute ^^
love the positive attitude

Good,
i Can Totally Relate..
Keep Up The Good Work..

It was very sweetly written...I do believe writing a love poem is not as easy as writing a sad one atleast from my experience but you did fantastically here..It was simple that made an easy read...But i do admire the love and affection that this poem was tryin to convey..A very cute and lovely dedication of a genuine feelingto someone you love..Good Job..

This poem is good but it is also too simple.
For example the lines
'I think about you
Each and everyday'

That was really simple and I agree with the comment earlier that someone made saying it was cliche. Just try expanding your vocabulary a bit, maybe you a thesaurus to help you get deeper words and lines.

4/5 Overall the poem was sweet and if it is nonfiction I hope you and your loved one all the best :)

-Shannon <3

Hmm. . . . .
The expressions are very sweet n strong at the same time... And portray ur true feelings... Good job! :)