Beautiful Mystery

by Jessica   Jul 25, 2008


Once beating and strong, lays silent and cold
surrounded in granite, eyes liquid and gold

Smoldering down at the usual prey
but locked in a stare where thoughts only sway

Beyond the exterior they soar through his mind
but withheld from all voices, it's hers he can't find

A wall of protection with nothing to see
unable to access or find the right key.

** Based on Twilight novel by Stephenie Meyer.

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  • 15 years ago

    by natyy

    Wow. is this the chapter in the meadow or something?

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wonderful rhyming and this really describes Edward, great job, you wrote this very well. Keep writing, always and forever...

  • 15 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Sorry! ^ Thats the second time ive commented! =) but, its wonderful none the less. =) x

  • 15 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    Oh I love it!
    It captures Edward perfectly!
    Very beautiful wording as well.
    Terrific. =)
    x

  • 15 years ago

    by JustMe

    Wow! Good job!