I liked your poem. you have constructed it well enough. rhymes rae also good. a good write... but 'hun'? that didn't seem poetic to me.
good poem though.

Really liked the poem and the way you wrote it , made it all flow well together... only problem i saw was maybe at the end with "hun" Either way was a GREAT poem =D

Oh wow, this was short, but beautiful. Even after it ended I wanted to keep reading. It portrayed the emotions to perfection - I could not see a flaw within the structure or anything else. Absolutely wonderful!

This was really cute. =] I love how a guy or a girl gives you a feeling like that. Love is something amazing. this was wonderful.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

This is gd. the beautiful poem like this set my day to the fullestz. i had a gd read. hope there's more new poems....... 5/5 for this

amazing, wonderful poem=)

Another good one!
5/5.
Keep up the great work! 8)

Darling,,

thats so waaaaaaaw,,,

thats really wonderfull,,

i can fell it in ur words .. thats really so touching..

m so lucky that i have u n my life & n my heart..

:-*

That was sweet. You can tell you really love whoever you wrote this about. Nice.

That Poem Was
Amazinq.
Great Job!
5/5!

You make it sound so convincing which im sure its true.

"Everytime we touch, heaven is I am at"

heaven is [where] i am at. sorry...

I loved it. The repetition was really good. The rhyme scheme worked very well, only thing is that it would've been nice if you ended it with a rhyme too, but it's still good. In the first line of the third stanza, "..heaven is I am at," I think it would sound better if you had the word 'where' in it, just a suggestion though. Nice work.

Great poem!...i really enjoyed it...it was a gd read...i liked how it flowed through...it shows true emotion..makes us wonder.....whos's the lucky guy???....lol....very good job!!..i hope to c more new poems!!

Lol Well Done on coming 4th in the contest Your poem is really AMZING
keep up the good work :D

Congratulation my love on getting the 4th in the contest
thats wonderfull

;)

Beautiful poem the flow is lovely, I love the repitition of first sentence 'Everytime we touch'
=] 5/5 great work

WOW!! this was amazing,beautiful&so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet..wish i can express my feelings that way..the poem is gr8..keep it up!!

Aww this poem gave me shivers
i no the feeling ur xplaining

i miss that feeling =[

great poem though
ur a reeally gud poet!

xxx

THIS WAS VERY GOOD YOU DESCRIBE YOUR EMOTIONS VERY WELL AND WHAT IT'S LIKE TO BE IN LOVE WITH SOMEONE

This is a masterpiece. this romantic and sensual poem is delivered in a perfect package
It would look beautiful on hallmark card
5>>>>>>>>>

I have to say, I came into this poem a little skeptically- afraid it might be some twist on the song. Aside from the somewhat interrupted rhyme scheme, I was pleasantly surprised. For once, a love poem I can stomach! Congrats on a good write.