Beaten till i blead

by Hollywood   Jul 26, 2008


When I'm looking out
Can you see in?
When I am looking around
Can you see inside my heart?
When I am looking down
Can you tell I'm hurt?
When you look in my eyes
Can you tell I have been
Beaten up
Till I could not stand up
Through the night
Just sit there and watch the blood flow
Down my face
To the floor
An evil laugh
Echos down the hall
Screams
My ear bleeds
I scream
I cry
I cant stand
Trying to stand
But my legs grow weak
I cry
As I get beaten down once again
Will you help me?
If I cried
Right in front of you?
Will you
breath for me
if i cannot breath for myself
If I do not wake
What will you say?
Will you help me then
When its just to late
I can tell you want to
But just don't know how
Just take my hand
And lead me away from here

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  • 15 years ago

    by kylexthexmagnificent

    Wow... this poem was really amazing. just very vivd and deep. dark and just awesome. i loved it :)

  • 15 years ago

    by XXVAMXXPIEXOX

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  • 15 years ago

    by xxDaniellexx

    Excellent!!!!!!!! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    This is very dark but describes things that happen everyday. I loved it, 5/5!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Yeka

    To deep of darkness. But I have to give it a 10 it's awsome (^_^)