Little Baby Girl

by HollywoodSmile   Aug 4, 2008


Baby doesnt live here
babys dead and gone
you missed her ending show
you ignored her final song

babys not your baby
baby begged to die
you never knew sweet baby
you shut out every single lie

baby sinned her biggest
baby did her best
baby grabbed the gun
and you suppress the rest.

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  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Short and to the point but amazing. I mean this really is fantastic. There is so much emotion in just a few words. I am mesmerized by your talent. Excellent job here.

  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Amazing write...loved the last stanza 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Short but full of sorrow and of hatred. Haunting and memorable.
    Great job with this poem.
    5/5
    -Ally

  • 14 years ago

    by Lolpez

    Haunting...

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Michelle

    Short... but tons of emotion.. great job

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