Knock Of Love On Our Lifes Door. (Collab)

by Courageous Dreamer   Aug 4, 2008


``Collab written with Broken Wing.

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WHEN NO ONE, NO LOVE KNOCKS ON YOUR DOOR!
WHEN YOU'RE ALONE, THEN YOUR LIFE IS BURIED IN THE CORE.

Life with no love, is like life with nothing.
Living with no passion, is like a crown with no king.
You're an angel that can breathe, but have no wings.
So you can't fly and can't soar in the sky of this life.
Come to the base ! life with no love is a key for strife.

Life without love is like a candle without a flame.
The candle needs fire in order to burn & frame.
Whereas in life, you need to love in order to live;
and to love, you need to learn not to take but to give.
It's just like a school that taught us to forgive.

Just as love vanishes from our unknown existence,
we will have no more taste and a cursed presence.
We will live like a thirsty person in an ocean,
how does it feel to live alone in the middle of a notion?
This is exactly how it turns, no love no life, no motion!

KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK, LOVE IS ON THE DOOR!
TILE RED RUGS FOR ITS MAJESTY ON THE FLOOR...

When love suddenly knocks our door,
the dark space lights out & shines glore.
Softly it warms & it hugs our frozen heart,
like the candle, it lightens our path for a new start.
Just when love joins your life, you'll know it's the day;
it's the moment to watch sorrow fading away.

Love in one's life will always bring happiness,
and wash away all worries and sadness.
Never in one's love life is there confusion,
there is such love that is pure never an illusion.
Forever and always love will splash, love will remain,
& never disappear, for it is permanent that never refrain.

Life with love, is like life with everything.
Living with passion, is like a crown for the king.
You're an angel that can breathe, and has wings.
So you can fly and soar in the sky of this life.
Come to the base ! life with love is a slaughter for strife.

WHEN THE ONE, YOUR LOVE KNOCKS ON YOUR DOOR!
WHEN YOU'RE NOT ALONE, THEN YOU BURIED STRIFE IN THE CORE

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sole

    5/5
    That was an awesome poem! I loved the structure, it was unique and yet felt so easy and natural to read. Some of the lines stood out as great, most stood out as amazing!! I really loved these two:

    'We will live like a thirsty person in an ocean,
    This is exactly how it turns, no love no life, no motion!'

    I thought they were so perfect, and again the reference to the angel without, then with it's wings. What a great write. Beautiful :)

    Sole x

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