Twisted Soul, Twisted Mind.

Twisted love and twisted pain, cutting the wrist of your only love is twisted indeed.

Wow-this is very different to your other poems ive read.

Its fantastic.

Love the rhythm and rhyme-very strong imagery and emotion yet again.

Another 5/5.

Aish
xoxo

"With a twisted soul and a twisted mind,
As these two hearts seem to be so unkind.
Who was meant to be? and what was made to be?
Why does this pain seem to linger on for you and me.? "

I really liked this new side (so it seems) of your poetry.I'm still not used to you rhyming but you did a great job ;)

"With a twisted soul and a twisted mind,
I cut your wrist as you cut mine,
Pleasure seeping with love for the both of us,
Keep us going in our own fantasy we must. "

This sounds to me to be sentual fettish for the lovers you speak of.Everyone loves eachother in a different way but as long as you do love...it's ok in my book ;)

"As these two hearts seem to be so unkind,
Leaving us both breathless and blind,
Senses heightened with the lack of another,
Pleasure caused by only you I want no other."

I really liked this stanza.Being blind heightens the senses allowing one to feel unlikemost people do and the simple fact that they are lovers exposing eachother tosuch sensations is wonderful.

"With a twisted soul and a twisted mind,
As these two hearts seem to be so unkind,
Finally together in this pool we call existence,
Having no meaning for any resistance."

This was also a joy to read.I like the whole "Having no meaning for any resistance." part of this stanza.Overall I loved the poem and the vision it created for me.You got my vote! 5/5 for sure ;)