by H E Losey Aug 10, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
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How long must we remember |
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I like this a lot, very true, I just felt like you could add more on. But still this was very heartfelt. Keep writing, always and forever... |
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Longer than we do for we seam to keep making them again and agian. |
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A nice rhyme, but again you could add more. I'm starting to see a big similarity of a few of thse new poems of yours, writing about mistakes in life and how they really can't be changed. |