Sorrow (Senryu)

by Aryaan   Aug 11, 2008


Building world by words,
excuse of forgetting throe -
hell eclipsed heaven.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    I found this very very powerful...
    specially "Hell eclipsed Heaven".. One can interpret it in so many ways... beautiful line...

    well written...

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    I love it =)
    You have to teach me those Haiku poems, Lol, I've never written them & people talk about them a lot =(

    Great write
    Keep it up
    & thanks for the lovely comment :))

  • 15 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Wow. This haiku is something to remember.. Very powerful, meaningful. So shortly says a lot. Yes...buildings are built every day. Yes, real hell build on earth, world by world... And ignoring the pain and cost of this building. Nothing more than discusting.

    This reminds me how one big shopping mall center was build by Asian workers... Their working conditions were nothing to brag about... But nobody wants to care about that...beautiful shopping mall... Mecca of western people... yuck, yuck yuck...

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