by H E Losey Aug 15, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
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If dreams and wishes could but come true |
by H E Losey
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I was trying to work a bit of wodr play with "change" not changing and "remain" becoming "reclaim" and being far enough seperated to fake a rhyme scheme.(2-8-10/4-6-12). Just had the thought/story then the words seemed to flow into place. |
by H E Losey
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Thank you for the praise of my simple words |
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Wonderful message expressed throughout this whole piece, a very touching and inspirational poem. Nice work. Keep writing, always and forever... |
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Oh that's another plate poem. ^_- It's cute and is indeed an inspirational little poem. :) I quite enjoyed it. |
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Good advice well done. |