Oh to be like them.. (Senryu)

Beautiful imagery and use of a metaphor. You have done an excellent on this short form to make the message meaningful!

I love this type of poetry because it makes your think more about the meaning than when it is displayed by actual words. Good job 5/5

Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyday was filled with smiles and laughter :)
Loved this!
Take care
Cindy

Wonderful piece. :) I love it! 5/5

This is really a great tanka. I love your poems Michael. Keep on writing....always and forever.