Hate (Tyburn)

by Spoken Silence   Aug 20, 2008


** A six line poem consisting of 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables. **

Burning,
Flaming
Battle,
Revenge,
Burning in hate, flaming with desire,
Revenge the hardest battle on fire.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Simple style, but you really made the title work very well. I loved the words you used, they were perfect (ex. flaming, burning, ect.)I'm not much of a fan of style writing, so I guess there's not much I can give you a critique on. But I loved it. It sounded amazing. 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Short, but very elegant, 5/5.