RRR (acrostic)

by Veamm   Aug 21, 2008


Rachel Rendon

Rays coming from the sun
Air bended my faded pace
Circulates with happiness
Having a presence on my days
Edited loneliness and sadness
Leaving a shine in my face

Raising a strength, a power
Elevating my self-esteem
Sold, vending a memory
Unique feeling, a territory
Ringing in the ear, a sensory
Reality, a fact from a reality
Elegy, a rhythm, a free song
Carried, a note from a gong
Intent to comfort my body
On beyond redemption
Name, Rachel my satisfaction

Rings, circles and it rotates
Erasing dilemmas, my worries
Nurtures myself and my soul
Developing an aura in my face
One! This heart for my love
Nailed a name in my heart

Comment is well accepted!
Thanks!
Veamm!

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  • 11 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Splendid. The acrostic wrote in meaningful poem even it was hard to do but you still managed it...
    well, deserve to rate excellent!
    5/5-C

  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Great job with this. An acrostic is quite hard to do while managing to make the whole poem have meaning. I love the imagery in the beginning lines, as the reader comes to the middle, it becomes more personal, and you let the reader get a glimpse of your life. The ending lines were my favorite. Great write. 5/5 :) Keep writing!

    -X

  • 11 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Wow. This poem is stunning, I'm at a loss of words to describe the beauty of it. Wonderfully written. 5/5