Yellow roses

The nights we spent at the edge of your bed
Now those memories makes me,oh,so sad
We were laughing,talking without knowing
our love deadline is coming

this was my favorite stanza. i really liked how you also use yellow roses, nice work.

This was a great piece. loved how it flowed<3

Forgot to tell you one thing ==> excellent poem

...i really missed your poems but since you write them when you are not feeling good
then i guess its ok :)

You know i was going to give you a big lecture about this but since i ran through the same (almost the same) exprience so i understand.

it's much better to leave him now rather than keep it fake. whatever your reasons are but i think this for the best.

as for the poem, i enjoyed it, i enjoyed it alot.
i can imagine the scenes and the feelings behind this poem.

i was emotionally motivated by this part
"Now i am so sad,and feel so guilty near you
It is hard to say-i used you
To forget some memories from the past
Its tearing to say-our love wont last "

but my best part which i can relate to it 100% is this one
"So now please forgive one last time
Since what I did can be called crime
Sorry,please,I am a heartless thief
Since i stole your heart and let you believe"
"