Emptiness (Palindrome)

by Spoken Silence   Aug 22, 2008


** A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same
forward or backward. **

Emptiness,
Forever gone,
Rain falls,
Tears cry.
Alone.

-Mirror-

Alone
Cry tears.
Falls rain.
Gone forever.
Emptiness.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Oh wow. I loved this style. It's reallly unique, and I love how you can reverse it and read it the opposite way and it still sounds really good. I don't think there's anything I would change about this, Jennifer did have a good point however on the puncuation, that tends to annoy me too. Other than that, the words you used fit perfectly with the mood [sad] of the poem. Great work. 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I only have one thing to say and that's about all the punctuation. Just look at it. O_< It works for the first one, then in the second one it's no period, then all peroids. It's just a little weird to me.

    Other than that I like the idea. It's pretty cool just reversing everything. XD Five.

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