Society

by andhereIstand   Aug 26, 2008


Soft kisses
breathed upon
milky skin-
trembling fingers
caress
silver moon breasts,

our only time
to be
truely togehter
a stolen breath
in a chokehold
called
society

hesitant lips
meet a second
apir
its
piano fingers
trace
sensual pictures
where only those
who own the
hearts
lock and key
may travel

a toungue
travels
over glistening
skin;
heart pounding
mind
falling
apart
eyes forever
searching for
and aware of
what little time
is
left

the clock ticks
an imposing beat
against the
heated
passion
of two
hurried
lovers
frames and hardened
by
stolen time-
their sensual,
sexual love
cut short
by their
upbringing

this is the only
way
to be right for
they
but it is not
unfortunately
they
who counts.

society.

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  • 15 years ago

    by MyMuse

    This was awesome O.O it was very like WOW!!! Like it painted a VIVID picture in my head...and i love those kind of poems really =] so good job on this!! I felt like i was reading a book with this cool plot =]

    CourtneyxHolland

    Keep on writing!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Second stanza, third line, "together" is spelled wrong.

    third stanza, third line, "pair" is spelled wrong.

    Nice poem. Good imagery. I just don't understand how it relates to society. Maybe I'm a moron or something. In all honesty, this sorta sounded like it ought to be in the explicit section. But hey, I could be totally wrong and totally be missing the whole point of the poem.

    Good write though! keep it up!

    -mo-

  • 15 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    REALLY GOOD IT WAS VERY DEEP AND FILLED WITH EMOTION I TOOK IT AS TWO PEOPLE LOVING THEM BUT SOCIETY IS KEEPING THEM APART

  • 15 years ago

    by Synthia Dowell

    Wow your poem paints a very deep picture, I like it.

    Synthia

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