Smile(lyrics)

by Michelle18   Aug 26, 2008


[Verse 1]
Another day has passed
And I still feel the same
Head full of doubts
'Cuz you're playin your mind games

All I do is cry
I need an inspiration
Just let me know you care
Tell me I'm your destination

[Chorus]

Look me in the eyes
And tell me that you see me
Baby kiss my lips
And tell me you still need me

If you hold me in your arms
Just for a little while
Say you're still in love with me
Boy you just might make me smile

[Verse 2]

I call you on the phone
And something just isnt right
You're holdin back your love
I can feel it everynight

Can't you hear my heart?
It beats just for you
Its tellin me to listen
But do you feel the same way too?

[Chorus]

Look me in the eyes
And tell me that you see me
Baby kiss my lips
And tell me you still need me

If you hold me in your arms
Just for a little while
Say you're still in love with me
Boy, you just might make me smile.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Annaam

    WOW... This is really very goOd! It's... sad n cute at the same time... :) The flOw, rhyming... everything is perfect!

    Keep It Up!
    5/5. :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    This one I think is your best! Although it sucks that I don't know how to read it lol. I tried reading it as a song but I'm not sure what the rhythm is supposed to be. They're great lyrics though and great emotions!

  • 15 years ago

    by Nee

    I think I can imagine this poem sung and it would be a great song :).. so lyrical and sweet

    Although I have to criticize some small things..
    The chorus lines were sort of average..you needed more creativity and romance to strengthen them
    Buuuut still it didn't lessen the beauty of the song =]

    I thought the first two stanzas rocked the whole piece.
    very well done...I'm actually encouraged to write a song, so I'll take this as a motivation for me
    Thanks for sharing

    Write on
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Ash

    Simply an amazing write. I mean the feelings were there and every line just seemed so perfected in the sense that it just came together so well and yet so effortlessly written. Excellent work! Keep it up! 100/5 from me.

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