The blue sky

by mvep   Sep 1, 2008


The blue sky reflect her beauty . The felling water

amaze her pretty unique skin. She is like the rain
thump.

Everyone wanted to approached her closely . Even

when the moon doesn't shine at night her golden smile

and her bright teeth stilled shined. she is the a light of

many soul . Even when stone floaty thunder rolled

lit lighted she is stilled standing the same.

Her beauty affects me to think about her all the time dreamed her.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Amazing poem! I like this. 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by ether

    I really like this, it's sweet and very original. Great imagery also.

    But most of all, it was easy to relate to.

    Good job, 5/5

    jess ~

  • 15 years ago

    by JSydney

    Nicely written. beautifully described.. (:

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    I agree with Soso, you need just a bit of work but you have wonderful talent

  • 15 years ago

    by AlongfortheRide

    Very well written, nice description.