Me and Mr. Razor

by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life   Sep 3, 2008


**Blood will be shed through the small slit on my wrist made by my enemy and best friend; Mr. Razor.**

I need someone to sit by my side,
to share this painful feeling that I have deep inside my heart.

Outside every one laughs,
And with every happy sound my heart slowly begins to break.

Only at night when everything is quiet,
When every one is deeply asleep,
I can let this feeling out.
This loneliness that will follow me all my life.

The razor I hide can only do so much.

This night in this lonely room I've lost control of myself and let my enemy, my best friend, Mr. Razor, take care of me.

While others sleep, I lay here with the stinging pain on my wrists.
I've learned that even when I'm happy this pain will always overshadow my life.

So tonight while every one enjoys a peaceful night I sit here watching the red slowly slide down my wrists.

To night I couldn't resist to this pain that insists every night on making me miserable.

Tonight me and Mr. Razor mourn for the blood that I've shed.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Second to None

    I can realy relate 2 that you seem alot like me. you should check out some of my work and tell me what you think. 5/5 =]

  • 14 years ago

    by xXxXhes the everything i cudve asked forXxXx

    Good poem. and im sorry you have a broken heart and you think you have to cut yourself to put the pieces back together. ive done it a couple times before but my boyfriend almost beat me for doing it. i know people who still do it and everytime they tell me or show me i just want to slap some since into them. lol. but i like the poem and again im really sorry for the way you feel. just (if you are) try and stop cutting. trust me. it might heal the pain you hold inside but those cuts will give you a reality check and there going to be the ones thats hurting. keep up the good writings.

    5/5.

    [[remember im not trying to tell you what to do just trying to help out]]

  • 15 years ago

    by Skyfire

    The last line really hit me...I've felt like that, mourning for what i've done. Good write!

  • 15 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Deserves 5/5 as along as u nd mr razor 2gther

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert

    The message was kind of hazy, and although it was a cutting poem and I read several I didn't find anything to really make the piece stand out. I think if you gave Mr. Razor more of a character then this piece would be very well done. Plot121

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