Gone With Luck

by Jessica   Sep 8, 2008


I swam through the current
watched it dry beneath my form
climbed the highest mountain
then it crumbled in a storm

Traveled through the forest
as the trees withered to dust
resided in a solid home
that swayed within a gust

Caressed my lovers face
as he sputtered for a breath
then gently kissed his lips
and he died a sudden death

Shouted toward the sky
and the sun froze overhead
so I left my luck to fate
but only turned up dead.

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I wrote this at 3AM while half asleep, haha.

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  • 14 years ago

    by military man

    Wow beautiful content language is jus walla.

  • 15 years ago

    by ruth

    I loved it !!! BTW thanks for the comment !!

  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    It rhymed really well and had a steady beat. i really like reading it! and 3am is the ONLY time both you and i write

  • 15 years ago

    by ruth

    I am blown away. you should write at 3 am more often.

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Excellent poem and an enjoyable, i do some of my best poems in the early hours, it seems to me you had quite a bit of luck with this poem.LOL

    Grant