Again

Sourav, a very strong yet emotional piece from start to finish

Sourav
A very heartfelt piece. The imagery is wonderful.

Once again that same turmoil
Back again that nasty pain
Tears! How long will you chase me?
I'm the submissive child of my destiny.

The pain from losing the one we love is the worst pain to suffer. Love the word choices

A bonding that is designed to death
Blind lane goes nowhere but to disaster
Love! Why do you like to play with my faith?
Your crafts I'll never able to master.

This stanza is my favorite. Seems like people give up on love to easily. Instead of trying to work through things together.

Time again to swim through the tears
Then again desperate for new hope
Dream! You are the one I hate most
Don't get in again like a creepy ghost

Very sad. Waiting for hope to bring light back into your life.
Great job!
Take Care
Cindy

Excellent piece of work well done my dear... a classic writing...

Dream! You are the one I hate most
Don't get in again like a creepy ghost
^^I asked for this many, many times, but when you least expect it a new dream creeps in:)
Good poem by you!

Hugs,

Ingrid 5/5

Very interesting form of poem. I love the structure. I think it is very beautiful

I like this poem because I feel the emotions are strong. Tears! Life! Love! Dream! Truly, it seems life has treat the poet's mind harshly enough to create such an inspiration to write a poem.

I admire your ability to write this art out of your pen. I am astonished again.

I can relate to this poem very well and the language you used. Well-thought sentence and everything. It is really nice work indeed.

I will add this poem to my favourites. :)