Today It Ends.

by Roxy   Sep 17, 2008


Each silent tear that falls helps push my pain aside.
With every step I take I'm searching for place to hide.
Words coming out my mouth are screaming for you to stay.
Tears spilling from my eyes, I don't want you to walk away.

Told me many times you would love me with your heart.
But the love that you gave me simply tore my life apart.
As I watch you leave you yet have something else to say.
"I'm sorry and I will miss you with every waking day."

Don't tell me false words because we all know they aren't true.
I hate you for what you've done, what you put me through.
My heart has always been broken but now I'm taking my last breath.
The love I hold for you has slowly driven me to my own death.

As I lay here lifeless all the memories of you are gently blow away.
One by one they are fading along with my life that will end today....

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nee

    Very well done on this one too !!
    I liked the last line a lot, I was like "why TODAY?" but now I find it really interesting :)
    I love the shortness in your piece but still getting to the point.
    I only have one small tiny criticism:
    The rhyming words you used here are predictable, try to use new rhyming words, and don't push it too hard, just let it be musical and felt from the heart.
    You know words with different endings do rhyme too, like "hard" & "part", "leave" & "me"
    they do have music inside :)
    that's the only criticism I have.
    I want your rhythm to be better because you're a good writer and you have creative ideas in your head =]]

    Best of luck xx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Prince

    Wow, I'm really impressed
    Don't let writer's block my dear,
    write a song/poem about writers block!
    It helped me :)

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