A beautiful white winter

by Tangible heartache   Sep 17, 2008


Tiny little glass snowflakes,
Fall upon the cold ground,
Its winters time to wake,
Coldness gathering all around,

Spiraling downward from the sky,
Like little individual falling tears,
Making their journey from so high,
The awakening so very near,

Trees shed their bright orange leaves,
Flowers wilt and die away,
Its beautiful cold threaded weaves,
Down on the ground, winter lays,

Clouds of icy breath fog the street,
Pouring down cold slippery rain,
Echoing down on me so sweet,
Special little snowflakes, never the same,

A wonderful, beautiful season,
Beauty hidden deep under the snow,
It's my favorite time of year, I need no reason,
It's just a beautiful white winter, that I know.

Written by Makalah Sept. 17, 2008

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lana

    This was a lovely poem with some beautiful imagery. Winter is also my favourite time of year. Enjoyed the read.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow! this was absolutely beauitful. i loved it alot, i want to read it again! so pure and you kept the whole poem focused on the winter theme, wonderful. it wasn't out of place or anything, it was almost perfect! you kept the flow steady and every line just got better and better. you have a talent, please keep writing!

    Ash

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Great poem:)
    you should check out some of mine!:)

    cheers
    Maddi

  • 17 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow beautiful you did so much better than I did in "winter's harmony" gosh i'm jealous!

    haha but wow!
    '
    5/5

    great descriptions, great ryme, beautiful poem!

    -HvN

  • 17 years ago

    by Wereallbladesarntwe

    Beautifully written, more please xP

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