by Wasted Fake Smiles Sep 24, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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I am so sorry I hurt you; I wish I could go back, |
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Aww this is beautifull. |
by Sourav
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It's nice to read. Emotional and simple. Good work! |
by Roxy
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Ahhh a very deep poem although I don't exactly know the situation that you are in I can tell that it's hurting you because in this poem you really let your emotions run free. I like the way you write your poem's the rhyming scheme isn't exactly the type of thing I normally like to read but I like it any how. Keep up the great work :) |