The power of the eyes

by kelleyana   Sep 26, 2008


THE EYES
 
Words are not enough
To express my feelings
My eyes speaks for my heart
My expressions comes from mines eyes
Mine eyes are so powerful, powerful as my
Mouth yet while my mouth fails to speak the
Truth Mine eyes reveals it all
Eyes, If you could speak You could let others
Know how I feel in my heart, oh mine
eyes
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  • 15 years ago

    by loving my kids tessa and savannah

    Good

  • 15 years ago

    by HollyWoods

    This one is completely amazing... it's so...Deep, and true... i love it!!! =]

  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well i like the way u start this poem but i think when it comes to the middle of it, i think u confuse urself by using the word mine instead of my...also there is an abrupt ending to some of the lines
    eg:
    Mine eyes are so powerful, powerful as my
    Mouth yet while my mouth fails to speak the
    Truth Mine eyes reveals it

    i think it would be better if u say it this way:

    My eyes are so powerful, powerful as my
    mouth
    yet while my mouth fails to speak the truth
    My eyes reveals it

    I mean those are juz some suggestions
    But i must say tt ur content is there so keep it up;)

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