My last Wish Come true.

by Steven Topaz   Sep 30, 2008


I'm tired of waiting,
I'm done with the rest.
Now I sit here dreaming
Of having the very best.

A year has gone by
And over and over again
They all make you cry.
Where has their hearts been.

I'm tired of being unsupicious
That I don't want you.
I hope that your not superstitious.
Because luck is not true.

All of my faith.
All of my heart.
Left in your mind
With you from the start

I'm tired of the dreams
about your tender lips
Where all love seems
A Midnight Eclipse.

I've been praying.
Since the day I met you
That maybe sometime
I get to love you.

And I pray
For that day.

My darkest day
Shone upon.
And all you did was say.
I love you.

You told me.
As the moon lifts.
What you want us to be,

An unbreakable wall
Forever in love we fall.
Wall unbreakable.
Fall in love forever.

My heart
Steaming.
The world
Only seeing.

The real you.
The real me.
How much more perfect.
Could life be.

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I love you Brittany

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  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    I actually really enjoyed this. I could tell it came straight from your heart because your love for this person just shone through. We all have that one person we dream and wish for with all our hearts and would do anything to have them by our side. I think you described that emotion nicely and truly brought it to life for me. I liked the style in which you wrote it because it was different and refreshing to read. Although the stanzas were broken and uneven, I think it flowed nicely.

    Well done, very honest poem.
    Thank you for sharing.
    *5/5*

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    This is beauitful and very sweet. i like it. i shall be reading on.. =) keep it up!

    Take care,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Awww very very sweet

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    I've been praying.
    Since the day I met you
    That maybe sometime
    I get to love you.

    very sweet. i like it. :]

  • 15 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Where has their hearts been.
    It's have and that's a question. :]

    I hope that your not superstitious.
    you're*

    The rhyming was pretty good, though it broke near the end and the stanza format changed, I know you do that, but it's still not as rhythemic to the reader to read even if it is your thing.

    It was an all right poem. The concept was fine.

    I'll give you a four.

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