You hit me.

by AngelicDecadence   Oct 13, 2008


Why did you say, "I love you,"
If you never really cared...
Why did you say you'd be there,
Only to leave me standing here...
Why did you say you were sorry,
When it wasn't an accident...
Why did you promise to protect me...
-Honey, why did you hit me?

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  • 11 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Why did you say, "I love you,"
    ^^ such a typical question : / it is sad that so many girls have to ask it!

    If you never really cared...
    ^^ guys always claim they did

    Why did you say you'd be there,
    ^^ such a desperate thought : / it is never fun to wonder this

    Only to leave me standing here...
    ^^ it always hurts to know someone could treat yo ulike that

    Why did you say you were sorry,
    ^^ i have asked it and never gotten a straight up answer! it is so frustrating!

    When it wasn't an accident...
    ^^ ah deliberate action...thats just cruel

    Why did you promise to protect me...
    ^^ so many guys say they will and end up hurting you more than anyone else would have

    -Honey, why did you hit me?
    ^^ : // no! thats so wrong! guys should not hit girls for any reason....i have been hit and you never forget it..

    very good poem short but sweet and to the point
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessie

    It was really good, flows really well... might have had more impact if the last line rhymed but stil had that meaning

  • 11 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Omgosh. i really like this. it is so easy to relate to. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 11 years ago

    by HvN

    Aww.. so sad but beautifully written!

    5/5