You hit me.

Why did you say, "I love you,"
^^ such a typical question : / it is sad that so many girls have to ask it!

If you never really cared...
^^ guys always claim they did

Why did you say you'd be there,
^^ such a desperate thought : / it is never fun to wonder this

Only to leave me standing here...
^^ it always hurts to know someone could treat yo ulike that

Why did you say you were sorry,
^^ i have asked it and never gotten a straight up answer! it is so frustrating!

When it wasn't an accident...
^^ ah deliberate action...thats just cruel

Why did you promise to protect me...
^^ so many guys say they will and end up hurting you more than anyone else would have

-Honey, why did you hit me?
^^ : // no! thats so wrong! guys should not hit girls for any reason....i have been hit and you never forget it..

very good poem short but sweet and to the point
5/5

It was really good, flows really well... might have had more impact if the last line rhymed but stil had that meaning

Omgosh. i really like this. it is so easy to relate to. 5/5 ~KM~

Aww.. so sad but beautifully written!

5/5