My first

by Jes   Oct 18, 2008


A sidelong glance
A moment's stare
A longing smile
Given the chance to care

A hopeful question
A satisfying reply
It was then decided
Our love, we could not deny

A quiet date
A cautious first kiss
A blossoming love
Feelings of such bliss

A warm embrace
Two hearts beating together
You promised me
Your love would last forever

A timeless love
Bound to last through time
Nothing could break it
Your love would forever be mine

Whispered secrets
Trusting words
Loving endearments
This is what I heard

A tight embrace
Together between silken sheets
A moan and a sigh
Feelings so sweet

Months went by
As our love grew
The end of our journey
Was no where near through

A promised love
One that would last forever
Maybe a wedding...
Never say never

In loving whispers
A future was planned
A wedding, children
Who knew this would end?

A hurtful word
A heated fight
No, no way
Could this be right

Our love was now damaged
Two broken hearts
Too late to fix it
We were ripped apart

No more Loving smiles
You hate me so
It wasn't meant like this
I swear, I didn't know

Three months later
A body on the floor
Broken and damaged
No desire to live anymore

A broken soul
The burning question "why?"
Alone in this room
All I do is cry

A sharp razor
Glinting in the light
No everything not ok
I'll never be alright

Broken promises
Open viens
Blood on the floor
Things would never be the same

Now a dead body
Laying in sorrow
All dreams gone
No more tomorrow

Everything lost
The smiles and love
Without him I'm nothing
Now I float above...

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  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    Again, i love your writing. this is so meaningful and also very helpful to me right now!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    A very lovely start and a saddedning end. A real story of what love can do to people. It's such a wonderful yet deadening feeling.
    Very well written, 5/5. Em x

  • 15 years ago

    by Bob

    This is really good. Course I am biased. I write a lot like you...love poems and well, the style is pretty much the same. Keep up the good work.

  • 15 years ago

    by XxEmotionally TakenxX

    Wow! this was a very deep and emotional poem! i like it alot! 5/5 no doubt

  • 15 years ago

    by Diana

    This poem is great, good descriptions...however this piece is very sad... :'( ... 5/5

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