Never Really Cared

Wooow excelent ! 5/5
i love this, u said a thruth which hurts most of us... but they will never admit that ! They r always busy, always tired, always exhousted, neglecting us...

Im speechless this poem was amazing

This poem was good. I enjoyed it. Nothing special that was overly great, like a pop out, but it did capture a moment in time.

I felt that this line:

"No attention do you pay to me" reminded me of Yoda, then again I am a little tired writing this. It suffered from flow issue's up and down, it was noticable.

I really liked how you continued with the next stanza's as the same sentence. It's often times hard to do, you did it alright. It was a unique write, one you should be proud of.

5/5

So much couples today experiences the same situations, most of the time its the men who ignore woman . Some men believes that as long as you're theirs ,you'll be always by their sides. They doesn't even understand that the women might feel like she's like a piece of furniture. Thats why it's good to discuss about things and situations which bothers.
good poem keep it up.