Arguing couple

by kelleyana   Oct 22, 2008


Telling her your biggest mistakes was to love her,
She told you loving her should be your sweetest mistake

Telling her that you were a fool to love her,
she told you that a fool in love makes no sense to her
she only think you're a fool because you pretend not to be in love with her

Telling her you thought you'd found the true love in her
she bitterly responded that true love cannot be found where it does not exist

he went further by telling her she doesn't care enough about him,
she responded that why should she care when he's never here

Then the problem started there
Even the fact they're here
they both felt that no one care
cause no one is here to share

Telling her how could she dare
he'd giving her all his pare time
Eyes in eyes then a big cries
he gave her an advice
that all this is a slice of life
and never will he hurts his wife
and he played her a fife,
her favorite song, the emotion
was so strong they both sing along

she was thrilled by his skilled
and she promised never again she will
they both smiles and promised they'll never buried their their differences and keep their anger
inside

they denied they'd never had a fight
but they do have arguments
it's health for their relationship,
but fight is not.

kelleyana

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  • 15 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Amazing poem... A must read poems for newly married people or spouses out of love... Its a great write. I guess you need to edit a bit but the errors are completely overshadowed by this great way of writing this poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    This poem is a side of two opposites for me. I liked it, but hated the subject matter.

    I know that this could have used a lot more polishing on the structure and the flow of the poem over all.

    I felt that his potrayed a real life situation and a very sad situation that came about.

    Aruging is not always the best point to do something, having discussions/disagreements is normal. Fighting I consider throwing and yelling and screaming. Arguements I consider heated debates.

    I think the poem was good, it got you thinking.

    Thank you as well for the nice comment.

    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful, Wonderful!!! Great Write!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Very nice.. I like it :-)
    5/5
    regards

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    I like it. well done. it touches on an issue that many of us feel.

    great work.

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