A very sweet and somehow cute piece. Flows perfectly and great rhyming as well. Ive noticed the repetition of last word or words in every first line of each stanza. Very unique and the pattern was perfect too. Extremely flawless. My favorite was the last stanza.Good job.

I'm quite impressed how you kept the repetition going for so long in this. Perhaps a little too long? I'm not sure. It just got very expected.
But the ending was a nice break from it and wasn't expected throughout the poem.

I'm not really one to like sweet poems, but this was great. A little cliche in some places, stop my tears etc. but overall, I think this is a pretty darn good poem.

The flow was good too, and you really did pull me in from the first two lines, I wanted to read more about what you were going to the say.
And the end ties it all in nicely.
5/5

jess ~

The poem is very sweet...
The repetition pattern is intersting, yet such patterns ought to be used carefully, so that it doesn't interrupt the flow... It didn't happen here, though... It flows very well...
The ending is original, in terms of form... The rhyme scheme at the beginning is pretty much classic (abab on the first five stanzas) and then you end with a stanza of a single verse...I liked it...
I find the whole poem quite original for a love poem...
The theme itself is deep, touching and beautiful...

5/5

*isabel*

I dont like the way the rythem for it seems to go. maybe thats just mee. i do like the idea for the poem though like how to take the last word in the 1 line and put it in the second one. "Take my hand - it's always waiting,
Waiting for your warm hand to hold" other then that
-Raindrop 4/5

Hmm, sweet poem. But the rhythm seemed a little off to me. Other then that it is a great poem. Nice word use. 5/5

This poem is a very passionate piece covering all the bases on erotic love moving deeply into the emotional, and above all the spiritual realm. I am very impressed. The wording and the great rhythm of the rhyme flows very well to connect with the reader
You seemed to have poured your heart and soul into this expression of romantic love

I LOVED IT!!!
It was cute and sweet and passionate and Emotional. It seemed so personal and I relate to it more than you could know... You did a GREAT job! The flow was incredible and the whole thing really worked together! nice work=]5/5

You have truly written an excellent piece of poetry here. I really, really liked the atmosphere and feeling of the entire poem. You kept the readers interest to the very end, and you finished it beautifully.

Hear my soul - it's always praying,
Praying for our love to be true,
Wait for me - even if we're swaying,
Because someday I will be with you...

^ This is really my favourite part, it's just so heartfelt.

All in all, beautiful! Be proud.

Love,
The Angel of Secrets

This poem was good. I enjoyed it at points, it was good. It had it's moment like all poems that you read here.

I felt that the poem was too repetative. I felt that it was too much for the poem and It must have been hard to do, but I know that it was definitely something that took away from the poem.

I felt that it didn't do anything to stand out from the rest of the poems on this site and it was very cliche.

The flow and the rythme were good, they were very well put together and felt that they were a very big point in selling this poem. I know that it's a good poem. It really has a great meaning to you I can tell that.

It's a very good poem and one which I would recommend a read to anyone who has time on their hands.

Very well done.

Bravo! My favorite parts were definitely the first line of every stanza. The pause in it was a little bizarre but it did have an effect that dazzled. Your rhyme was impeccable and your wording was outstanding. Overall it was a sweet, cute poem.

I honestly loved this piece of yours it was so moving and cutee:) You had a lovely way with words throughout the whole piece. My favorite was probably the last line because it summed the whole poem up just beautifully. Nice job 5/5

Ahhh this was so beatiful! When I first read it I didnt have time to comment so I nominated for the weekly contest because its worthy of a win. The style in which you wrote in was unique and very appealing to the eye while I was reading. The flow was flawless and the rhymes you used didnt seem to be forced and just fit together perfectly. The love expressed here was just so beautiful it made me smile. Every girl wishes the guy of their dreams will say that to them, it was very sweet and cute! You can capture many hearts with the genuine emotions and desires you expressed. Beautifully written, one the best poems I've read in a while.

"Open my eyes - they're always seeing,
Seeing your hearts deepest desires,
Take me away - the life you're freeing,
Quickly before our time here expires,"
^ This stanz was so beautiful and my fave!

Well done.
*5/5* :]

"Catch my soul - it's forever calling,
For you and me to never be apart,"
Catch?Calling? to never be apart? Bad vocab ><

"Hear my soul - it's always praying,
Praying for our love to be true,
Wait for me - even if we're swaying,
Because someday I will be with you..."
I like this last stanza, good finish.
4/5

This poem shows nice and beautiful expressions...I feel this same way. It's crazy because it seems like we could get along really well. Anyways this poem was very beautiful 5/5