The Path of Fate

by Shinobi   Oct 29, 2008


Guided by faith, walking to the unknown
Our lives are enslaved to the bonds of love
Seeking peace, following a path of our own
Searching for a sign from the heavens above

The path of destiny holds many dangers
Such changes a weak heart could not withstand
At first, people around are considered strangers
Later, our circle of friends usually expands

Love, the only need that requires to strain
The ultimate goal is hard to achieve
when we see our image shattered in rain
We find our own truth, in which we believe

Finding a matching soul requires walking
The path for happiness lays far ahead
Beware of those who'll break your heart
And those who enjoy making you sad

Once again we walk the road of destiny
Guided by faith, pacing toward the end
With our hearts beating to the voice of love
Without feelings of loss, we finally ascend

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Melanie, everyone has a path of their own.
Just remember to keep walking!

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    I gotta say, I'm impressed that you managed to use the rhymes "love" and "above" which are used very often, in such a natural way. With those kind of well-used rhymes it's important to make it flow properly. Well done!

    Finding a matching soul requires walking
    The path for happiness lays far ahead
    Beware of those who'll break your heart
    And those who enjoy making you sad

    ^ What a great stanza, I really enjoyed it, it was flawless.

    Anyways, great poem all in all. I liked the theme and the atmosphere of it all. Excellent work.

    Love,
    The Angel of Secrets