Tears lost in rain

by Alliey May   Oct 30, 2008


A wet rainy day
Lost in the gray

A rip in the seams
Holding broken dreams

Crying for light
In this infinite night

Standing alone
No place to call home

The hurts comes again
Surrounds from within

No place to run
The cold leaves you numb

Nothing out there
An empty nightmare

Quietly waiting
Silently hating

The rythym of rain
Why is life so insane?

Is life so worthless?
Does death serve a purpose?

Or is it all in vain?
Like tears lost in the rain...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dan

    I like the emotion. It's pretty dandy.

    -Dan

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    I thought you had a good start here, but a few of your lines have too many syllables which throws off your flow. A few quick fixes here and there and you could greatly improve it.

    Overall not bad, but room for improvement, keep writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kuro

    I like how the title fit well at the end of the poem. it was my favorite part.

    nice job~Ben

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow i like it. good job!!!
    10/10

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