Not Feeling To Good

by Brittany C   Nov 6, 2008


Burning, hurting
this pain inside.
Never easing
never leaving
always draining.

Sight is dimming
after a while.
Head is spinning
brain is throbbing,
feeling sick.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    For me this poem just doesn't do it, it is very short and thrown together "in my eyes" that is. The flow was off in my opinion but the structure was spot on just wish it had more stanzas to develop the meaning behind the poem more.

    Overall not your best work I felt. 4/5 from me since you did give it some thought.

    Peace, Joe

  • 15 years ago

    by ALEX

    Oh, see I like this one!
    It's a perfect little snapshot of a feeling.
    Not even an emotion, just feeling sick.
    5/5

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