Neither she nor he

The last 2 lines said it all ,
the flow was amaizing , little by little take me from a state of seperattion to death,..

and i agree with you , once we have such strong love for soo long time ,...

every little piece of memory , cut the wound more deep
and we need to heal these wounds not make them deeper , ...

the doublet and the repetition of the frist part of the frist line in each doublet was very intresting to read , but you are sure HE did these too?
if they both hurt a lot liek this why be seperated from the frist place ? i hope not the life circustances and some external force did not appear ...

but oever all the alst 2 lines say all the pome

great work

Nice poem 5/5

Nice poem 5/5

Life is so tragic, u never know what so ever, This one was ever wonderful & I think I will remember this poem for a long time & I will save this on to my desktop...

Wonderful work dear friend.. keep it up..

Best wishes... Karan