Is this true..?

by AngelicDecadence   Nov 8, 2008


I smile every time I look at you,
I laugh only when your near,
I'm actually happy around you.
To me, you are a perfect flaw.

You called me an angel,
I said you lied,
But you never gave up,
No matter how much I tried.

I've never trusted others,
Because I always had you.
But your gone now,
And I'm started to wonder if we were true.

I know I loved you,
I still do.
But you are never coming back...
Can we really be through?

I know I'll never stop caring,
To me this was real.
I know I'll never stop loving you,
I know, to me, we will always be true.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Aveena

    Nicely done.
    keep it up.

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Awesome poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
    The only thing I saw that you might fix is
    "ill" should be "I'll" I know it is a small thing butt yeah some people make a big deal out of it. Anyways I gave this poem a 5/5. Nice job.

  • 15 years ago

    by DarkCrystalbtrfy

    Once again the imadgry that you have used in this poem is exelent. You have defenatly used the writers saying well, and that is:
    Writers arnt people who have something to say as much as people who find a diffrent way to say things.
    Bravo!

    Well Written
    Darkcrystalbtrfy

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I smile every time I look at you,
    I laugh only when your near,
    I'm actually happy around you.
    To me, you are a perfect flaw.
    ^^ twisted last line nice nice nice! good way to start it with something interesting makes me wonder why and what happened

    You called me an angel,
    I said you lied,
    But you never gave up,
    No matter how much I tried.
    ^^why did he "lie"? what gave you doubt?! why couldn't he prove it? something in your past?

    I've never trusted others,
    Because I always had you.
    But your gone now,
    And I'm started to wonder if we were true.
    ^^ah...that is not good : / its never fun to question those types of things

    I know I loved you,
    I still do.
    But you are never coming back...
    Can we really be through?
    ^^ i have felt likes this before and it hurts so bad i really related to the poem here!

    I know ill never stop caring,
    To me this was real.
    I know ill never stop loving you,
    I know, to me, we will always be true.
    ^^ such a good ending to answer one of the key questions you had earlier on was just the right thing to do!

    I could so relate to this poem and that is such a good thing to have the reader do! great wording and flow! there were no bumps 5/5!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very emotional... well done. Keep writing!