Last Goodbye

You expressed the poem really good that when I read it, it relates... It is very dark indeed...yet when died was so sad....nice poem!

So dark and yet so sad
This poem made me feel bad

I really felt the words that were written.
Very well expressed.

5/5

I completly understand this poem ... WOW this is AMAZINGLY well written !!!

WOW

5/5, this is wonderfully written i found the 2nd and 3rd stanzas the strongest these took my breathe away especially
"Razor held tight
My blood is seeping
these are my tears
so no more weeping"
This is so true you have written it so beautifully it shows the true emotion. The 3rd stanza wonderfully gives the reader a vision of the nights that hurt the most cold, lonely and gloomy. The final stanza i found a great way of finishing the poem i think the falling to the ground and picking up the hand to say goodbye is brilliant. Fantastic work, look forward to reading more.

Great poem. Very emotional and i can realy relate.

I agree with jenna about the last verse, a little weak but still gd =)

The verse that starts 'The thunder rolls...' was fantastic - very deep

Overall a great poem

5/5
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